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A highly advanced civilisation, ruled by an Information collecting AI named Bellatrix and her clone/copy android representatives, venture yo the stars to find out more about their space.
An explorer ship made to reach out to far away planets quickly finds an interesting planet populated by the same race of intelligent life that created Bellatrix, humans. (this was found via a probe plane released into its atmosphere that took pictures in the sky)
Eager to find out what is going on the Bellatrix representative (or known simply as Bellatrix if the original one in not present) aboard the explorer ship decided to land a base somewhere on the planet right away.
The planet had many similar features to the one Bellatrix came from except that the vegetation their had a few other common colors besides green like light blue or purple. Bellatrix placed the base in a calm sea surrounded by land, and at the same time she sent a small group of stealthy robots to nearby land to kidnap a local so he/she can teach them their language. She made sure the robots knew that the person they picked needed to be able to write and read very well. The mission was successful, the robots captured a lady in a nightgown that knew how to read and write.
In about a month and a half of captivity Bellatrix ,with the help of her captive, had learned the local language of her area. She also found out alot about the woman whom they kidnapped, her name was Beed Seaborne, She was a princess of a nearby kingdom but was (pretty much) traded into another kingdom in exchange for soldiers and an alliance. She was to marry one of the kings sons named Damian Valdez who was verbally abusive and not kind at all. Even then the king she was traded into only gave 3/4 of the soldiers he was asked for. Although she was worried that problems between the two kingdoms would grow with her mysterious absence she did not want to go back because she feared Damian will never let her go or be free ever again.
So Bellatrix decided to communicate with the Valdez kingdom and clear up any confusion they may have with their princesses disappearance as well as negotiate permission to establish a new smaller base near their capital to help communicate with the Valdez efficiently.
PROLOGUE
A highly advanced civilisation, ruled by an Information collecting AI named Bellatrix and her clone/copy android representatives, venture yo the stars to find out more about their space.
An explorer ship made to reach out to far away planets quickly finds an interesting planet populated by the same race of intelligent life that created Bellatrix, humans. (this was found via a probe plane released into its atmosphere that took pictures in the sky)
Eager to find out what is going on the Bellatrix representative (or known simply as Bellatrix if the original one in not present) aboard the explorer ship decided to land a base somewhere on the planet right away.
The planet had many similar features to the one Bellatrix came from except that the vegetation their had a few other common colors besides green like light blue or purple. Bellatrix placed the base in a calm sea surrounded by land, and at the same time she sent a small group of stealthy robots to nearby land to kidnap a local so he/she can teach them their language. She made sure the robots knew that the person they picked needed to be able to write and read very well. The mission was successful, the robots captured a lady in a nightgown that knew how to read and write.
In about a month and a half of captivity Bellatrix ,with the help of her captive, had learned the local language of her area. She also found out alot about the woman whom they kidnapped, her name was Beed Seaborne, She was a princess of a nearby kingdom but was (pretty much) traded into another kingdom in exchange for soldiers and an alliance. She was to marry one of the kings sons named Damian Valdez who was verbally abusive and not kind at all. Even then the king she was traded into only gave 3/4 of the soldiers he was asked for. Although she was worried that problems between the two kingdoms would grow with her mysterious absence she did not want to go back because she feared Damian will never let her go or be free ever again.
So Bellatrix decided to communicate with the Valdez kingdom and clear up any confusion they may have with their princesses disappearance as well as negotiate permission to establish a new smaller base near their capital to help communicate with the Valdez efficiently.
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i have the number 001 up there so i can keep track of things i make that currently dont have a name.
i have the number 001 up there so i can keep track of things i make that currently dont have a name.
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Interesting synopsis. I like the twist regarding the Bellatrix being created by humans. This can definitely be developed into a novella exploring the characters and themes you've set up here 